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Location: Fort Wayne, IN
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I am a complete cat finatic. If someone likes making songs or flashes but can't think of plots, just contact me. I love to write stories, so I would be glad to help. (I can also compose entire songs in my head! No lie!)
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"Nice melody, some things could change."
The piano often gets off-tempo from the rest of the music and for some reason the guitar feels a little out of place. Perhaps you could build up to it and add some more hints that it should belong. However, I do like the piano piece itself and the melody is neat. Keep working at it :)
Author's Response:
Yea I rushed the shit out of this song
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I think the soft part at the beginning is just a tad too long, and you could add strings in there, mostly violins. Also where the pitch climbs, put in trumpets or maybe French horns. Put in quiet bass strings at the end, with long steady notes. Maybe even make the piano a minor part. The melody is lovely, but I do see what you mean when you say that this could be expanded upon.
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This totally reminds me of a scene that I'm putting in a webcomic of mine. I'll pm you the link when it gets drawn :) I like the song, but I think it could use a few more instruments, to make it sound fuller, if you know what I mean. The melody is excellent, though, and the transitions, though abrupt, are placed very nicely.
Author's Response:
I can send you a score and you will see that it's full. There are no more places to add instruments. It's recording fault, because there are too many instruments and they are all more quiet, because of reverb and computer (if you know what I mean). Anyway thx for review and I'm waiting for your PM. :D
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You are a master at what you do! This is SO going to be the background music for my next forum PVP! 5'ed, fav'd, 10'd, and saved.
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Slightly repetitive, but quite nice. Not as good as Rose At Twilight, in my taste, but still good. It reminds me of one of the Phoenix Wright trial songs, though.
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So cool! It caught me right from the beginning and kept my head bobbing until the end! Sadly, I need to keep my headphones on (lest I wake my parents) so I can't experience the epic bass everyone's talking about, but incredible nonetheless!
Author's Response:
Make sure you listen to this with a good sound system sometime. It will enhance the experience.
thanks for the review. keep on listening.
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The intense beauty of this song is absolutely incredible. It envelops the body in such a calming and hopeful sensation that is unmatched by anything that I've heard before. Your work is spectacular! Don't give up!
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It's so calm, and has a sad air about it. I'm not sure what I think about the grace notes, though...
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I've heard the original song, and this is a great remake! This is so going on my Ipod... secretly...
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Thanks for the review!
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The tune is catchy, and I loved your use of "layering" at the beginning. But, like 0SCUD0, I think that there's something missing. The whole thing doesn't seem full, if you know what I'm saying. I feel you could add one more element to the whole thing. Keep up the good work!
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